Thursday, August 30, 2007
A Good Question
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I know this is a strange comment, but I'm a little confused. What are you doing with this? Are you going to write the next exerpt to the chosen story? If so, that's a pretty brave, fun, and quite unique idea. Kinda like a "choose your own adventure."
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I bet a lot of people are wondering the same thing, so here's the answer, I hope it's clearer than mud!
It's not just me writing a next excerpt ... it's anyone who wants to throw one into the ring. I did enter one into the first chapter, so did a few other people (some sent more than one entry). But no one knows who is who, they are just voting on the story.
Next, anyone who wants to will send in a 'what happens next' bit to the story and we'll vote on that to see where the story will take us.
Exactly like a 'choose your own adventure' thing.
The winning story, "Finding Hope" might appear to be clearcut .... a tragedy, a romance. But I've been thinking about it and there are so many ways it could go; it could be a romance, sure, it could also be and LDS or other religiously uplifting story about finding faith, it could be a conspiracy theory, a thriller ... I'm sure the list goes on and on.
Anyone can submit a continuation to the story, whether they consider themselves a 'writer' or not, whether they are professional or not. This is just a fun exercise I think more in what readers want than in our skill, although I think "Not From Around Here" had a lot of potential but was probably robbed because only one paragraph was submitted so the story didn't have a chance to 'present' itself properly.
I'm writing very badly tonight myself. I've been paying bills for the last hour. Can you say 'brain cramp'? So forgive me if this really is no more clear than mud. Please, ask questions. Remember elementary school? There are no dumb questions. (only dumb answers ... oops!)
Wednesday, August 29, 2007
Finding Hope ~ Interactive Story Chapter One Winner!
Joseph stood, trembling, trying to regain his balance. His head throbbed and he found it difficult to see through the rivulets of blood running down his face. He couldn't stop, though. There were others hurt far worse than him; he was needed.
He bent to reach the woman in the black Mazda. She was awake, but her door was so buckled, she couldn't get out without help. When Joseph leaned down, he glanced into the side view mirror. He stopped. His blood ran cold at what he saw there. He first pressed his face closer to the mirror to see better, before realizing he could turn and see for himself. Yet, he hesitated.
Time seemed to draw around him like a cloak. He pulled it closely about him, letting the world come to a stop for a moment. He turned then, slowly. As he finished his about face, he squared his shoulders and prepared himself for what he had glimpsed in the mirror.
Several cars behind him, thrust through her windshield, unmistakably, undeniably, lay his wife. Her car, her hair, the same white blouse she'd been wearing when he kissed her goodbye this morning.
As he took each leaden step toward the wreckage of her white Honda Odyssey, he remembered, vaguely, her describing the day she had planned for herself and the boys. Back to school shopping in the city. He hadn't realized she'd planned to leave right away. He hadn't realized she had been only a few cars behind him. He hadn't realized ...
Every joy in his life was encapsulated in this vehicle. Without her, oh God, without them, what was there now for him?
*© 2007 belongs to author, name currently withheld until the contest conclusion
Interactive Story Contest Chapter TWO!
Finding Hope won by one vote with The Mirror Cracked and Along for the Ride just one vote behind.
But the voters have spoken and I said we'd go with the story with the most votes, so Finding Hope it is!
WRITERS: write a second installment of Finding Hope and submit it to me at ali at aworkofheartphotography dot com by Sunday night at 11:59.
Continue the story from where this first chapter leaves off. What do you think will happen next? Tell us and we'll decide which story we like best!
VOTERS: tune in next Monday to read the next 'chapters' of Finding Hope to decide which story direction you like best.
Also, please be sure to register your vote in the poll on the blog; comments on entries do not count.
I'll re-post Finding Hope above, so you can refer to it easily.
Good luck to everyone and thanks for participating!
Monday, August 27, 2007
Interactive Story Voting
Following are five fun stories. Choose which story line you like best and vote for it!
Voting will go through today and tomorrow, closing at 11:59 p.m. on Tuesday.
After a winner has been determined, the next 'chapters' will be written based on the first chapter that was chosen.
Good Luck and Have Fun!
Not From Around Here ~ Entry #5
*© 2007 belongs to author, name currently withheld until the contest conclusion
Along For The Ride ~ Entry #4
*© 2007 belongs to author, name currently withheld until the contest conclusion
Sunday, August 26, 2007
Finding Hope ~ Entry #3
Joseph stood, trembling, trying to regain his balance. His head throbbed and he found it difficult to see through the rivulets of blood running down his face. He couldn't stop, though. There were others hurt far worse than him; he was needed.
He bent to reach the woman in the black Mazda. She was awake, but her door was so buckled, she couldn't get out without help. When Joseph leaned down, he glanced into the side view mirror. He stopped. His blood ran cold at what he saw there. He first pressed his face closer to the mirror to see better, before realizing he could turn and see for himself. Yet, he hesitated.
Time seemed to draw around him like a cloak. He pulled it closely about him, letting the world come to a stop for a moment. He turned then, slowly. As he finished his about face, he squared his shoulders and prepared himself for what he had glimpsed in the mirror.
Several cars behind him, thrust through her windshield, unmistakably, undeniably, lay his wife. Her car, her hair, the same white blouse she'd been wearing when he kissed her goodbye this morning.
As he took each leaden step toward the wreckage of her white Honda Odyssey, he remembered, vaguely, her describing the day she had planned for herself and the boys. Back to school shopping in the city. He hadn't realized she'd planned to leave right away. He hadn't realized she had been only a few cars behind him. He hadn't realized ...
Every joy in his life was encapsulated in this vehicle. Without her, oh God, without them, what was there now for him?
*© 2007 belongs to author, name currently withheld until the contest conclusion
The Jailer ~ Entry #2
Strange the things you think about when your life is about to end. Except, somehow the crashes had stopped and Joseph found himself sitting perfectly comfortable in the drivers seat of his Honda CR-V. He wondered briefly how he had managed to get himself out from the wreck that was his windshield, but his musing was cut short by a quiet cough from the passenger seat.
There sat a stranger, dressed in black, his face smooth and ageless, though his hair was as white as the deployed airbag that sagged on the dashboard in front of him.
Joseph stared at him. The strange man smiled kindly back.
“Hello,” said the man in the black.
“Am I dead?” Joseph croaked. Quickly he racked his brain trying to list all the bad things he had done for surely this must be hell, what with the screaming, the sirens and this ... man ... dressed in black. He certainly didn't look like an angel. But his smile seemed kind enough and none of Joseph's normal signals were going off alerting him to evil. He narrowed his focus on the man, trying to perceive more, to understand.
The stranger was shaking his head, slowly, sadly. “You are not quite dead, Joseph,” he said inexplicably.
“Your work is not yet done here. But you will need better tools with which to do your work.”
Joseph shook his head, understanding eluded him.
“I'm an accountant. What tools do I need?”
The stranger laughed then.
“Why, you are the Jailer now, Joseph. And you have much to do.” Suddenly the stranger thrust forth his finger and touched him gently, with one straight finger, directly in the middle of his forehead. Joseph had no time for thought before his body slumped mindless into his seat.
*© 2007 belongs to author, name currently withheld until the contest conclusion
The Mirror Cracked ~ Entry #1
*© 2007 belongs to author, name currently withheld until the contest conclusion
Wednesday, August 22, 2007
That's Hot.
Why, you ask? Because I'm in St. George this week and oh yeah, it's hot. That's H-O-T hot. Hot like Hades. I heard a local describe it as turning your blow dryer on high and blowing it straight in your face. Or opening your hot oven and sticking your head in. It's that hot.
But why is it funny? Because at girls' camp my role in the little skit we did was to play a Paris Hilton type character and of course I said "That's hot". I either did such a bad job or such a good job that the girls went around saying "That's hot" to me for the rest of the camp and I got the "That's hot" award. *U*
So every time I come out of a store and get slammed with the blistering heat of this desert-turned-oasis I have to say "106 degrees? That's hot!". And then I laugh.
Where is my purse dog and limousine?
Saturday, August 18, 2007
Interactive Story Premise
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Joseph Carlisle was having an ordinary day. Work lay within sight yet frustratingly far away as he was stuck in yet another traffic jam. But this day was not going to be like any other, in fact this was the day that Joseph Carlisles' life would change forever.
When the first crash boomed, Joseph was startled out of deep thought just in time to comprehend that his face was about to plow through his windshield. Again and again the crashes came until there was deadly silence, followed by screaming and wailing. How he survived the wreck, Joseph didn't know. He pulled himself from what was left of his car and stood, shakily, surveying the terrible scene.
Joseph tried to help, but people screamed and ran from him. Confused, he didn't begin to understand until he caught a glimpse of his face in a side view mirror. What he saw there made his blood run cold. What he saw changed everything.
ali at aworkofheartphotography dot com
before Sunday, August 26th 11:59 p.m.
Interactive Story Contest Rules & Guidelines
WRITERS:
Shortly, I will post the premise or 'book flap blurb' on which you will base your story. You may start your story wherever you like, when the character is born, when he dies, or anywhere in between - it's all up to you!
Following are the rules to the game:
1. You must base your story on the provided premise.
2. Please keep your entries clean, i.e. free from vulgarities, and bad language, etc.
3. Editing services will not be provided, so your entry will be posted exactly as you sent it; be sure it is just how you want it to be before you email it to me.
4. Your entry may be as short or as long as you would like to make it.
5. You can enter as many times as you like.
6. You may submit an entry at any time, whether you have previously submitted or not.
7. All entries will be listed as ANONYMOUS contributors to keep the game fair, but I'll keep track of your submissions so that I know who to award the prizes to.
8. Entries will be accepted from Monday through Sunday each week. You may email them to ali at aworkofheartphotography dot com.
9. Stay tuned for additional rules should I feel a need to add them!
READERS:
1. Voting will take place every Monday and Monday only.
2. You may vote as many times as you like.
3. Your votes will control the direction the story takes, so choose wisely!
4. You may post comments for the different entries if you care to do so, but keep it nice!
5. Please come back every Monday to follow the story and vote your choices!
the writer with the most votes
and
the writer with the most entries.
Interactive Story Contest
Come back
Monday, August 20th
for the Story Premise and Rules of the Game!
Friday, August 17, 2007
Emergency Numbers ...
Emergency Numbers
When in sorrow ......................................................... call John 14
When men fail you ...................................................call Psalm 27
If you want to be fruitful ............................................call John 15
When you have sinned .............................................call Psalm 51
When you worry .........................................call Matthew 6:19-34
When in danger ........................................................call Psalm 91
When God seems far away ....................................call Psalm 139
When your faith needs stirring ............................call Hebrews 11
When you are lonely and fearful .............................call Psalm 23
When you grow bitter and critical ................call I Corinthians 13
For Paul's secret to happiness ....................call Colosians 3:12-17
For understanding of Christianity........call II Corinthians 5:15-19
When you feel down and out .......................call Romans 8:31-39
When you want peace and rest ................ call Matthew 11:25-30
When the world seems bigger than God ................. call Psalm 90
When you want Christian assurance ............. call Romans 8:1-30
When you leave home for labor or travel ............. call Psalm 121
When your prayers grow narrow or selfish ............ call Psalm 67
For a great invention/opportunity ........................... call Isaiah 55
When you want courage for a task .......................... call Joshua 1
For how to get along with your fellow man ........ call Romans 12
When you think of investments and returns ............ call Mark 10
If you are depressed .................................................call Psalm 27
If your pocketbook/wallet is empty call ........................ Psalm 37
If you are losing confidence in people ........ call I Corinthians 13
If people seem unkind ............................................... call John 15
If you are discouraged about your work ............... call Psalm 126
If you find the world growing small and yourself great ..........call Psalm 19
Alternate Numbers
For dealing with fear ............................................ call Psalm 34:7
For security .........................................................call Psalm 121:3
For assurance .........................................................call Mark 8:35
For reassurance .................................................call Psalm 145:18
NOTE: ALL LINES TO HEAVEN ARE OPEN 24/7!
Answers to Life's Questions
Elder M. Russell Ballard
Is there a God? ~ Alma 22
What does Jesus expect of me? ~ 2 Nephi 9
How will belief in Jesus help me? ~ Alma 36
Is there life after death? ~ Alma 40
What is the purpose of life? ~ Alma 34
Why do evil and suffering occur? ~ 1 Nephi 2
Should babies be baptized? ~ Moroni 8
Does God know me? ~ Alma 5
How can I find peace and joy in life? ~ Mosiah 2 & 4
How can I have a happy, united family? ~ Mosiah 2
How can I balance family and career? ~ 3 Nephi 13
How can I strengthen my relationships with my spouse? ~ 3 Nephi 3 & 14
Enjoy!!
Thursday, August 16, 2007
Stay Tuned ...

On Monday, August 20th, I'm going to begin a writing contest of sorts. An interactive continuous story where you get to submit your chapters for your readers consideration.
I'll give you the 'teaser' for your story, what might be on the back flap if it were a book, you take it from there!
Entries will be posted each Monday and on Monday only your readers will vote on which chapter they liked best. Then entries will be accepted through the rest of the week for the next chapter of the story, based on the voting outcome.
There will be cheesy prizes for two categories: The writer with the most votes and the writer with the most entries.
So come on back Monday and be ready with pens in hand to get writing! This will be a great writing exercise for all of us and I think lots of fun to see which direction the story goes.
See you Monday, August 20th!
Wednesday, August 15, 2007
The Highwayman
The Highwayman
PART ONE
I
THE wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees,
The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas,
The road was a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor,
And the highwayman came riding—
Riding—riding—
The highwayman came riding, up to the old inn-door.
II
He'd a French cocked-hat on his forehead, a bunch of lace at his chin,
A coat of the claret velvet, and breeches of brown doe-skin;
They fitted with never a wrinkle: his boots were up to the thigh!
And he rode with a jeweled twinkle,
His pistol butts a-twinkle,
His rapier hilt a-twinkle, under the jeweled sky.
III
Over the cobbles he clattered and clashed in the dark inn-yard,
And he tapped with his whip on the shutters, but all was locked and barred;
He whistled a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there
But the landlord's black-eyed daughter,
Bess, the landlord's daughter,
Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair.
IV
And dark in the dark old inn-yard a stable-wicket creaked
Where Tim the ostler listened; his face was white and peaked;
His eyes were hollows of madness, his hair like mouldy hay,
But he loved the landlord's daughter,
The landlord's red-lipped daughter,
Dumb as a dog he listened, and he heard the robber say—
V
"One kiss, my bonny sweetheart, I'm after a prize to-night,
But I shall be back with the yellow gold before the morning light;
Yet, if they press me sharply, and harry me through the day,
Then look for me by moonlight,
Watch for me by moonlight,
I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way."
VI
He rose upright in the stirrups; he scarce could reach her hand,
But she loosened her hair i' the casement! His face burnt like a brand
As the black cascade of perfume came tumbling over his breast;
And he kissed its waves in the moonlight,
(Oh, sweet, black waves in the moonlight!)
Then he tugged at his rein in the moonlight, and galloped away to the West.
PART TWO
I
He did not come in the dawning; he did not come at noon;
And out o' the tawny sunset, before the rise o' the moon,
When the road was a gypsy's ribbon, looping the purple moor,
A red-coat troop came marching—
Marching—marching—
King George's men came matching, up to the old inn-door.
II
They said no word to the landlord, they drank his ale instead,
But they gagged his daughter and bound her to the foot of her narrow bed;
Two of them knelt at her casement, with muskets at their side!
There was death at every window;
And hell at one dark window;
For Bess could see, through her casement, the road that he would ride.
III
They had tied her up to attention, with many a sniggering jest;
They had bound a musket beside her, with the barrel beneath her breast!
"Now, keep good watch!" and they kissed her.
She heard the dead man say—
Look for me by moonlight;
Watch for me by moonlight;
I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way!
IV
She twisted her hands behind her; but all the knots held good!
She writhed her hands till her fingers were wet with sweat or blood!
They stretched and strained in the darkness, and the hours crawled by like years,
Till, now, on the stroke of midnight,
Cold, on the stroke of midnight,
The tip of one finger touched it! The trigger at least was hers!
V
The tip of one finger touched it; she strove no more for the rest!
Up, she stood up to attention, with the barrel beneath her breast,
She would not risk their hearing; she would not strive again;
For the road lay bare in the moonlight;
Blank and bare in the moonlight;
And the blood of her veins in the moonlight throbbed to her love's refrain .
VI
Tlot-tlot; tlot-tlot! Had they heard it? The horse-hoofs ringing clear;
Tlot-tlot, tlot-tlot, in the distance? Were they deaf that they did not hear?
Down the ribbon of moonlight, over the brow of the hill,
The highwayman came riding,
Riding, riding!
The red-coats looked to their priming! She stood up, straight and still!
VII
Tlot-tlot, in the frosty silence! Tlot-tlot, in the echoing night!
Nearer he came and nearer! Her face was like a light!
Her eyes grew wide for a moment; she drew one last deep breath,
Then her finger moved in the moonlight,
Her musket shattered the moonlight,
Shattered her breast in the moonlight and warned him—with her death.
VIII
He turned; he spurred to the West; he did not know who stood
Bowed, with her head o'er the musket, drenched with her own red blood!
Not till the dawn he heard it, his face grew grey to hear
How Bess, the landlord's daughter,
The landlord's black-eyed daughter,
Had watched for her love in the moonlight, and died in the darkness there.
IX
Back, he spurred like a madman, shrieking a curse to the sky,
With the white road smoking behind him and his rapier brandished high!
Blood-red were his spurs i' the golden noon; wine-red was his velvet coat,
When they shot him down on the highway,
Down like a dog on the highway,
And he lay in his blood on the highway, with the bunch of lace at his throat.
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X
And still of a winter's night, they say, when the wind is in the trees,
When the moon is a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas,
When the road is a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor,
A highwayman comes riding—
Riding—riding—
A highwayman comes riding, up to the old inn-door.
XI
Over the cobbles he clatters and clangs in the dark inn-yard;
He taps with his whip on the shutters, but all is locked and barred;
He whistles a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there
But the landlord's black-eyed daughter,
Bess, the landlord's daughter,
Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair.
Tuesday, August 14, 2007
I feel so loved ...
This award is especially sweet to me because being nice is very important to me. It's not about being a pansy, it's about respect. I won't let you walk all over me, because I'm a person of value and worthy of your respect. I don't need to be sarcastic or rude to you if your opinion differs from mine, because I can still respect you. Through it all, I can be nice, you can be nice and I bet my patootie that we'd all be happier for it. I'd like to pass this award on to Candace Salima, who though she is very busy and I am a 'little person' she takes the time to comment on my little blog, write very thoughtful and engaging posts on her own blog, and responds kindly to visitors to her blog. She's NICE!
Product Raves!
Here's my top two current faves:
The Swiffer SweepVac.It works awesome in my kitchen for every day pick-ups. Much faster and easier than a broom and pan, PLUS it gets even those small little dusty grits that collect on hardwood floors and brooms just can't get.
Also, you can run it with a wet cloth (or at least I do, lol) so it's a quick and easy clean too.
The vacuum surprisingly well and picks up tons of stuff including cheerios, rocks and candy wrappers. It does need emptying after every use because it has such a small reservoir, but hey, I'd be dumping a pan, right? No big.
LOVE this product.

I also love my Clorox Bleach Pen.
Works beyond awesome on stains on white things.
My boys love white polo shirts but come one, they're six year old boys, right?
They can't keep a white shirt clean for the life of them.
At a wedding a couple weeks ago one of them dripped a big ol' drip of chocolate right down the front of his white polo shirt and made a M-E-S-S. I wasn't sure if even the bleach pen, though wonder worker it was, could pull this one off. But I scrubbed on the bleach using the srubby end, threw it in the wash and voila, good as new!
Awesome product!
That's it for now. Tune in again soon for another installment of Product Raves. :)
Monday, August 13, 2007
The Art of Sky Gazing
Yesterday afternoon, in the sweltering heat of the day, my husband and the boys and I went for a little walk with Jack. Jack needs practice 'loose leash' walking and the boys needed to get out of the house.
At the end of the walk, we lay down on some soft grass under a couple of shady trees on the school ground near our home and looked up. Way up.
Ooh, that reminds me ... when I was a child my favorite TV program was
The Friendly Giant. It was through shows like this that I came to appreciate the world around me. I can still clearly recall the theme song "Early One Morning". I think this show was primarily a Canadian show, so you probably have no idea what I'm talking about.
Anyway, lying there on the grass, my dog attentively watching the world around him, my hand comfortably grasped in the hand of my husband, my children rolling around on the grass, that I experienced a moment of true bliss.
I did not have a terribly happy childhood. There was abuse, neglect, abandonment ... you name it. However, what I did have is a highly active imagination and loads of time in which to use it.
Cloud gazing was one of my most favorite pastimes.I can still feel, like it's happening to me at this moment, the feel of intermittent sparkles landing on my face like kisses from heaven, as the leaves of the trees above me flash in the wind. I saw in the cloud formations above me, not random shapes but rather whole worlds and sometimes even angels. I felt close to God, though I had no religious training; I felt the connection to my Maker in my soul.
My children did not grasp the beauty of the moment we were sharing. They enjoyed, for a second, seeing what shapes they could discern in the clouds, but they didn't have the patience or interest in remaining there to let time pass. My husband and I, however, staid for quite a while. We even came up with a new book idea inspired by the clouds. Not that I need a new book idea when my idea shelf is already full, it was still a joyful experience to find another idea inspired by a childhood love of solitude. I wish my children could have these same memories, but I can't make them. I can only provide the opportunity and hope they find the joy in it, as I once did.
Later that night we drove up to Little Cottonwood Canyon to watch the Perseid meteor shower.
We all lay on top of our SUV, comfy in our sweats, laying on blankets with pillows to cushion us, but best of all, squished together so arms pillowed heads and hands stroked, and our togetherness buoyed us. It was wonderful. Another moment of bliss. How lucky am I to have experienced two such moments in one day?We only saw a handful of shooting stars, but as they were my childrens' first, they were joyous. Best of all to David and I, was the conversation we enjoyed with our boys while the blanket of stars lay over us.
We talked of everything from UFO's and Aliens, to the wonders of God's creation; from how being a good person is more likely to gain you success in life to how you ask a girl to marry you; from the science of shooting stars, to the blessing of the sealing ordination. It was wondrous.
We'll definitely go back next year to see this natural light show, but David and I also feel like we want to find opportunities to do more sky gazing with the boys. It brought a peace to all of our hearts and opened our minds to all the possibilities that this amazing world holds for us. We all deserve many such 'best days'.
Have you experienced bliss lately?

